Monday, December 05, 2005

there is a reality in this fake world i live
(i live (( i live!)) i die)
and you are by my side
and one is naked) I (or) you(
and these things that we have done
‘these things that we do’
these things are the things that the Stillness brings
in this peace in this dark together (apart)
and you touch me… or was it? i-you
and the genuine fades with the light in to new
and this dark is consuming all essence of you
((of you) of you (of me))
and -this ‘us’ is- all that i see
the one that i want( the one that wants me) in this world is all
is this such a fall
for me to live ((to live!)(to die)) life alive?

-Jn 12/05/05

1 comment:

Ramblin' Ed said...

Yeah. That's what I'm talking about.

I sure do enjoy seeing the words and/or thoughts bouncing all over the page like that.

you-me-i-we pow pow pow. I love it when they come out rattatatttatt like machine gun fire.

Did't get all of the parenthesis usage, but since I am comma boy my ownself, I guess I got nothing to say.

Loved the post today.